After getting some opinions on my initial storyboards, it seems the antagonist is not villainous enough. The series of events leads the viewer to feel sorry for the main character, Crabs, rather than disliking him.
Firstly, instead of Crabs being mischievous and sly but tricking the seagull with a fish, he will taunt the bird, giving the proverbial 'finger' (claw?). He will then go and attack the seagull by pinching at its legs. This leads the story to the same effect, as the bird hops away in pain and the hat topples off it's head.
Later on in the story, instead of getting caught by the line and losing the hat he attacked the bird to get, he will grab the bacon, but notice the line. He will cut the line and look up to once again taunt.
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